Thursday, June 18, 2009

Flash Friday 55

Unable to deny it

this itching piece of me

just below the surface

wanting to be free.

I sit in the sun

or under the shade tree,

the feeling in me wakes

of running wild,

being free.

Never fear,

should you happen

upon a naked banshee

it’s my inner wild child,

running barefoot

being free.


Every Friday, compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. if you want to join in the fun and games and give it a try. Post your story and report to the boss G-Man!

24 comments:

Linda S. Socha said...

Cat
I hear that!! Love the photo and the free inner child
Hugs
Linda

Patrick said...

If I see you I'll be sure to wave!

Linda S. Socha said...

P.S. How do I create a link to my current post with yours?
Linda

Ann H. said...

Ugh, I know the feeling, its what screwed me up in the first place, no impulse control...

Mama Zen said...

Marvelous, Cat!

FrankandMary said...

My naked banshee inner child would love to join you. ~Mary

Lou said...

I would love to be right behind you..but in one of those covered carriers from Roman times (I'm afraid of horses!)

Tall Karen said...

That's really beautiful! and the picture so fits the description! Great 55!

Alice Audrey said...

I've never seen a naked banshee before. I'll keep an eye out for her.

Rolf said...

I like this post

Riding bareback and nude with no fear.

anthonynorth said...

Liberation of the soul, here.
Great.

Shadow said...

this is wonderful. and freeeeeeee.

Hootin' Anni said...

Ohhhhhhhhhh, I do, I do so love this. One beautiful 55 and so filled with emotion of freedom.

Dr.John said...

Great 55. I think we have all had those moments when we want to run free.

Mary Ann said...

I hear you!

clean and crazy said...

this is invigorating, i love it.

Melli said...

YAY! I want to be a naked banshee running barefoot and free too! Don't we all! What a beautiful poem!

Lani said...

nicely done! I enjoyed the read.
L

Fandango said...

We dragons never wear cloths. we are always free.
Wonderful poem
Great 55
Our 55 is up

g-man said...

There you go with the barefoot again....

GREAT 55 Cat, thanks...G

Akelamalu said...

Ah, naked and free - what we all want to be! :)

jadey said...

Being free to be who you are is a wonderful thing. Great post my 55 is up

Woman in a Window said...

THAT is what it's all about!
That's what i'm talking about!
Hoot hoot, et all that.

My mom used to call me Lady Godiva. I think she has a steady influence on me.

I like your spirit, Cat.

MomsJournal said...

Love the picture that goes with the post. If I should see you run free past me I may just join you. ;-)