Fingers of memory reached beyond their grasp for a redeeming moment that had gone between them. Briefly she paused to take in the woman before her, a stranger to her now, beautifully done up for the occasion, lying in the casket. 'If only her heart had been decorated as lovely', thought her daughter walking away.
Friday Flash 55 Hosted by G-MAN
20 comments:
Ouch, Cat!
Great 55, you always have an original.
Whoa! I always look forward to your 55's and this one does not disappoint! Have a great weekend Cat.
Yep, GooooD 55.
Maybe a Part II and III, and IV etc? Could be glimpses of the past...
Wow! Well done! I sorta thought that while looking at my own mother as she lay in her coffin! Cat...your writing rocks! Hugs and love! Lisa
Oh God, Cat, what if my kids think that of me? They have not talked to me really since I stopped drinking...
Powerful stuff here.
I think this stands alone just as it is OR it could leave me wanting more.
PG
Wow! This was powerful
ok, so I am new to this flash 55 thing, so went to G-mans site to read what it's all about.
Whoa your's was powerful stuff!
You are SO GOOD at these 55's! And ouch, the truth can really hurt. Some of us do reap what we sow, even after we die.
yeowzers, that was quite the 55.
Jeez Cat...
Remind me to stay on your good side OK?
Excellent and very thought provoking 55 My Dear..
Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Fantastic Week-End...G
JayZUZ! That is powerful. What a slap. Love it!
Heartfelt. It makes you stop and think in a short few words. (Hugs)Indigo
Oh Cat you are always so good. That is very powerful. What a gift you have.
Organ music Piercingly high!!!
It is amazing the 55 words you used here, can make such a poweful statement. Thanks for sharing!
Just. Wow.
No love lost there then!
WOW Cat!!!! you get right to it!!! very well done!!!
I would like to do my best in the living years. Thanks Cat.
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